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This video teaches you how to write descriptions brilliantly, with some techniques your teacher is possibly ignoring.
Begin with powerful verbs!
Learn about the sound of your words, with alliteration, sibilance and assonance.
Understand how to build a climax with adjectives.
Discover the reason to avoid most adverbs.
Learn why personification and metaphor are better than similes.
See how to ‘show’ instead of ‘tell’.
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